Services

Developmental editing      Line editing      Proofreading      WRITING COACH

My goal is to help you organize and clean up your manuscript so your voice is heard. Whether
you are looking to self-publish, make your manuscript the best it can be for submission, or share your

memoirs with family, I never forget this is your story, your voice.

Together, we'll look at the big picture:

  • What's the hook?
  • Are your characters believable and relatable?
  • Does the timing of your plot feel natural?
  • Is there conflict and tension?
  • Is the voice consistent?

And the smaller picture:

  • Is your sentence structure clear and compelling?
  • Is the tense consistent?
  • Are your word choices varied, interesting, and appropriate?
  • Is the grammar correct and/or consistent with your voice?

judy.b.roth@gmail.com